Over the past few weeks, myself and Anais have been working on a mind map. Here is a picture to see how we did.
100word challenge
I was just sleeping and I saw a bright light out side and it... Was...ALIENS coming for me (I did hurt them a week a go) I do not want to die. Please don't kill me the aliens had me prisoner in the cell called the pit. Slowly,the sky got darker "HELLO ALIENS!" I couldn't see a thing also I fell out of the UFO and fell it to the living room mmmm " hi mam" she did't reply to me. "Can I have tea please" she did't reply to me "mam are you all right I when'd to my room and I where'd to sleep The scariest night ever!
Tonight was Halloween, and I was getting ready to go trick or treating. I was rearing and ready to go. We were going as ZOMBIES! My brother (Keiran) was on the sofa watching TV. He said "only puffs go to Halloween parties." My mate coily invited me to a party and it was going to be amazing. Only a few people I knew was going but I knew it was we were going to have fun. We were in the party room and I went to the toilet and I heard some shouting and screaming! I rushed downstairs and I was amazed to see ZOMBIES! Coily yelled"get outside!" We couldn't get away from them. We shouted "HELP! HELP!"No one could hear us. Slowly the sky got darker... Nothing compares to what I witnessed on Christmas Day! Absolutely nothing. We were enjoying our Christmas dinner and pulling our Christmas crackers when there was a large BANG! Slowly, the sky got darker. The pure snowy sky turned into total darkness. My Father walked slowly towards the kitchen door. As he reached for the door handle, the electricity went off. All we had for light was a candle we had lit. The storm lasted for hours and we couldn't do anything but wait for it to stop. Without warning, my father jumped up out of his seat and started singing and dancing. Before very long, we were all laughing and dancing with him. Even though it was cold and horrible outside, we were illuminating the sitting room with our joy.
Well done to the 4 people who have entered the 100 word challenge online; this means children and teachers from everywhere can see you work. Does that make you nervous or excited?
There are only 9 hours left if you want your writing on the 100wc.net website! In other news, Mr Patterson's class are debating whether to put Minecraft on the iPads. Use your persuasive writing skills here to argue for or against. |