I was just sleeping and I saw a bright light out side and it... Was...ALIENS coming for me (I did hurt them a week a go) I do not want to die. Please don't kill me the aliens had me prisoner in the cell called the pit. Slowly,the sky got darker "HELLO ALIENS!" I couldn't see a thing also I fell out of the UFO and fell it to the living room mmmm " hi mam" she did't reply to me. "Can I have tea please" she did't reply to me "mam are you all right I when'd to my room and I where'd to sleep
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I was just sleeping and I saw a bright light out side and it... Was...ALIENS coming for me (I did hurt them a week a go) I do not want to die. Please don't kill me the aliens had me prisoner in the cell called the pit. Slowly,the sky got darker "HELLO ALIENS!" I couldn't see a thing also I fell out of the UFO and fell it to the living room mmmm " hi mam" she did't reply to me. "Can I have tea please" she did't reply to me "mam are you all right I when'd to my room and I where'd to sleep
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Joel
16/10/2013 07:18:52 am
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Charlie E
16/10/2013 08:04:39 am
Thats realy good I like the range of puncation.
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