Mr Temple here is my 100 word challenge since I couldn't find the link
Giggling frequently, I started to hiccup and sick welled up in my mouth, as we supposedly arrived in Lanzarote. “Alright everyone listen up, we have arrived in the southern part of Lanzarote” explained the Captain, but all we could see was water. “Sir, which part of the water are you referring Lanzarote to”, I questioned as I climbed up and brushed my delicate, soft, gingery hair. The sun began to set when I realized that if Lanzarote was here it must be under us. “Stop!” I said multiple times. “We are here in Lanzarote but sailing above it, it appears it has sunk like Atlantis” I stated.
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Mr Temple
9/2/2014 02:51:18 pm
I loved the ending to this - very dramatic, although I wasn't as keen on the sick comment - urgh! Great speech marks and your opening ing clause.
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Alyssa
9/2/2014 09:53:14 am
Mr Temple, here is my 100 word challenge. I could not find the link.
We looked around for signs of food but all we could see was water. I was running out of arrows and Peeta was running out of time. He had a gaping hole in his leg and blood was pouring. I needed something to help his wound, but what? There wasn’t anything but water and bushes with no leaves for miles and my legs were already hurting so I wasn’t prepared to continue walking. As I started hurrying back to our cave, I spotted a squirrel. My face lit up with a smile and I pulled an arrow from my back. I shot it right in the eye!
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Mr Temple
9/2/2014 02:52:35 pm
A fantastic entry in the style of the Hunger Games. Well done!
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Kristen's mum
6/3/2014 09:10:21 am
Good work on science!
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