"Cinderella, oh what a beautiful girl." sighed the door man. I wish with all my heart that her big blue eyes would set on mine like clay; when we pass every day in the palace entrance he thought to him self. Coming from the big wooden doors stood a beautiful princess, waves of perfume surrounded him as she flung her pink blouses at him and murderously growled through her gleaming white teeth, "Starched NO creases!". Still Happily smiling his face was covered in dirty washing he sighed disappointedly again .
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Mr Temple
9/3/2014 02:20:49 pm
Great twist, Rose - an evil Cinderella. Parts of it reminded me of Cinderella and Rockefella but with your character saying "No creases!"
Mrs Henderson
9/3/2014 03:14:14 pm
Great 100 word challenge. I rather liked where you said , "Waves of perfume surrounded him."
Rose
13/3/2014 12:43:26 pm
Corrected 100 WC by Rose Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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