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Kathy @ Team 100WC
4/10/2013 01:43:16 pm
Lara I liked reading your very imaginative story. I too would wonder about such a sight, but I guess you never know! What a fun story - love that the turtle did the limbo to a song called turtle duck - very clever! Nice work of writing and using the words in the prompt.
logan
5/10/2013 09:14:32 am
I loved your 100 word challenge Lara it really made me laugh! I liked the bit where you said 'we danced to a song called the turtle duck' and the story is about a turtle. is the turtle best friends with the duck? I also liked your use of brackets in the first sentence. I was confused why you needed a capital letter (in the penultimate sentence) for stood.
Mr Temple
7/10/2013 03:19:03 pm
Like the others, I smiled at this. Well done for writing such a good idea in 100 words. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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