Write 2/3 reasons why you should be allowed this.
Don't forget a greeting (Dear .....) and signing off (Love from).
Remember: Although it is informal, still use openers (WAI) etc.
Be persuasive (using emotive language, questions and facts / figures)
Imagine that you want to stay up late to watch a programme on television. You have chosen to write a letter to your parent / carer so you can give the best reasons and support it with statistics (you can make them up!)
Write 2/3 reasons why you should be allowed this. Don't forget a greeting (Dear .....) and signing off (Love from). Remember: Although it is informal, still use openers (WAI) etc. Be persuasive (using emotive language, questions and facts / figures)
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Dear Mam,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 10:52:26 am
Those sleep experts know what they are talking about - is he called Kevin Connolly by any chance? Good arguments.
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3/5/2012 10:39:04 am
Dear Mam,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 10:53:07 am
Terrific organised arguments. Great openers to structure your ideas. Did it work?
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Dear mam,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 10:54:33 am
A small request - 15 minutes. Well done for using posh language like humourous.
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Bethany
4/5/2012 11:36:01 am
Dear Mam,
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bethany
4/5/2012 11:37:11 am
sorry i forgot to do paragraphs
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 10:55:41 am
A persuasive letter - well done! You have given 3 good reasons to watch Emmerdale. Good editing too!
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Bethany
4/5/2012 11:36:45 am
Dear Mam,
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Rhiannon Telford
6/5/2012 03:49:33 am
Dear mum and dad,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 10:56:47 am
Well done for using statistics to back up your argument. Saying 'Trust me' also is persuasive.
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Luke
7/5/2012 01:23:16 am
Dear Mam,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 10:58:26 am
An organised letter and some good openers. You have appealed to your mum effectively.
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Lewis M
7/5/2012 08:22:24 am
Dear mum,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 11:00:09 am
An excellent argument. You have openers well (although some commas with them would show your 'breathing) and persuasive language.
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india!!x
7/5/2012 11:11:27 am
Dear Mam,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 11:02:15 am
3 good reasons to persuade your mum, supported by good explanation of your reasons using because.
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Jasmine
7/5/2012 11:39:33 am
Dear mam,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 11:03:53 am
Lots of technical vocabulary and emotive language (and you are always telling me to look after MOTHER EARTH!). Very good!
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abbi
7/5/2012 12:55:48 pm
Dear mam and dad,
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 11:04:54 am
Some terrific openers and use of statistics to support your idea.
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jay p :)
7/5/2012 03:18:00 pm
Dear Mam
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Mr Temple
9/5/2012 11:06:10 am
With such promises, how could anyone refuse? Even a tidy bedroom?
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Arundeep mehat
1/6/2012 07:50:53 am
hello i am in y3 and in my class i heard sum bands and i have sum fun
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hannah
1/6/2012 08:13:07 am
if i was a queen i would make sure that everyone gets what they want
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