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4/10/2013 12:33:17 pm
Hi Sky!
Sky
16/10/2013 04:20:27 am
I like Olivia's writing so much I have read it so manny times, I know this storey of the back of my hand. I love it so much there is nothing I could change.
Mr Temple
6/10/2013 07:48:44 am
An excellent 100 word challenge this week. You have used the key words, included commas and your full stops are mostly accurate. Well done for using connectives like 'because'.
Kaine
16/10/2013 04:20:54 am
Well done Sky I like your punctuation add more connectives. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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