Kieran was a normal everyday boy who was 13 years of age but sometimes he let his imaginary get the best of him. Like the time he tried to blow up the school because he thought he heard a noise when he was washing his hands. Or the time he believed the internet had died and no one was aloud on it.This is the story of when he believed J.K Rowling was an alien. This is how his story starts he gets up at exactly 7:20 goes down stairs and makes some Pineapple butter (which is Pineapple juice mixed with butter) "Kieran"his mum screamed he doesn't reply eats his toast and goes out. Any new news he asks Kaine his best friend YES! J.K Rowling is a alien he imagined what colour GREEN DUH! yes how very silly of me as he walks away. There was a compition to meet her you had to do a painting of the cover of one of her books he done Harry Potter and the deathly hallows and submitted it. After a few days he finds out he won and gets 1 ticket to meet her. He sets of for London and gets at the address only to find out shes not a Alien. As the temperature dropped suddenly, he drops his ticket and sprints ... NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN!
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Mark Temple
13/10/2012 03:32:45 pm
Well done Niall, you have taken much greater care of your punctuation so can be proud that it's being shared with the world!
Liz Goddard (TEAM 100WC)
14/10/2012 08:25:24 am
Hi Kieran,
chantelle h
14/10/2012 12:56:19 pm
I was playing out with Bethany in her garden. The wind grow bigger the cloud's turned grey we new that there was going to be a thunder storm. My mam shouted for us to get in the house. The cloud's gone normal the thunder cloud's had vanished, all we was waiting for was the flash. We was sleeping in my tent all our stuff was in the tent. Amy came to see if we were ok and to see if we were coming out to play. My mam told amy that we would be coming out in about 10 mintues due to us having our tea.After we all played together it was time to go back to the tent to go to sleep,but the temperature has downed so it got really cold so i said "to bethany that i was going home were it was lovely and warm" and i said "to bethany that i would see her tomorrow at school."
Kieran
16/10/2012 05:03:25 am
Wow niall that was great ALIENS WOW! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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