Patiently, I nervously waited at the outstanding colourful sign glittering in the vivid sun.The vision of the undiscovered blood curdling domain of the egnima gods, sent shivers through my fragile body. Suddenly, the automatic gates opened which had a creaky old sound that played from the deafening speakers of the exhilarating theme park. Fearfully, I bravely put one foot in the theme park. There it was again, the mysterious sound of the alarming gods horrifically whispering welcome repeatedly getting louder and louder. Out of the corner of my eye I was mesmerised by the sound of the immense screaming and the tracks vibrating as the roller coasters whizz past me, I grinned with excitement then I was about to run then I stopped myself as I stopped and starred at the unimaginable rides there was the biggest formidable ride in the world, The enclave of frantic cyclopses than I turned to my left surrounding me was the Simulated skull of illusions...
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Patiently, I nervously waited at the outstanding colourful sign glittering in the vivid sun.The vision of the undiscovered blood curdling domain of the egnima gods, sent shivers through my fragile body. Suddenly, the automatic gates opened which had a creaky old sound that played from the deafening speakers of the exhilarating theme park. Fearfully, I bravely put one foot in the theme park. There it was again, the mysterious sound of the alarming gods horrifically whispering welcome repeatedly getting louder and louder. Out of the corner of my eye I was mesmerised by the sound of the immense screaming and the tracks vibrating as the roller coasters whizz past me, I grinned with excitement then I was about to run then I stopped myself as I stopped and starred at the unimaginable rides there was the biggest formidable ride in the world, The enclave of frantic cyclopses than I turned to my left surrounding me was the Simulated skull of illusions...
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