When I woke up this morning I realized that the field that used to be GREEN was now covered with a white blanket of snow. The CARAVAN next door was now just a big white lump. It felt really HEAVY on my legs as I was RUNNING to school, however I didn’t mind. Also the world is just one big marshmallow. The houses were all covered in FROST. Cars stuck with people trying to push them out. Children were sledging and making snowmen. Despite it snowing, no one cares. Next year I do hope the snow will fall again sooner!
So sorry for the late reply.
This is a lovely piece of work, you've worked the prompt words into your 100 words well.
I'm not sure about the marshmallow sentence, it doesn't fit well within the rest of the piece.
I got a little fed up with the snow. Did you get much?
Andrew
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