My CARAVAN was covered in snow we had to dig all the snow from the bottom to take it to the Lake District. In Kendal the frost was so bad that we had to sleep with the dog. The dog was running through the fields with his hair as wet as the sea. The frosty green grass was as emerald as can be. The snow fell heavily as the dog was running through the snow. He caught snow balls in his mouth. However the frost is as nice as a bunch of flowers.
Well done Ethan. I loved your descriptive words, they got my imagination going and I could get a good mental picture of what you were describing. I think it would be useful to read through your piece at the end and check you have all the punctuation needed - I sometimes forget too when I am typing instead of writing!
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