Hi Mr Temple! I've finished my story! Any ideas on how to improve it?
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Mr Temple
20/10/2012 10:30:17 am
A moment to celebrate - well done! You certainly haven't lost your touch.
About improving it, the first thing I would focus on is formatting it to a uniform size / spacing between lines etc.
If you use the Ctrl A (select all) function, then make changes this might work. I'll post about you completing it soon, although we are going away to Howtown next week, so I might wait until after half term for maximum impact!
It will take me a while to write another book, so shall I put on a diffrent one I have been writing?
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Jodie-
5/11/2012 04:11:23 am
I have read most of Jade's story and I would just like to say I think it is amazing!
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