On Sunday night I went to Edinburgh in a caravan and all I saw was the golden crispy sun shining bright. I went running though the sparking Emerald grass slushing my hair and dancing around the nice breezy air. Early Monday morning I looked out the tine window and I saw a frost cloud coming I know that there was snow coming. By time it got to 8pm at night it was 5cm. “Mam look where is the lovely green grass gone”. Mam can we go home because it is going really heavy? “No” but why. next, we got home before it got heavy.
Great writing Cantelle . It would be even better if you spelt tiny right. Sorry if you weren't meant to spell tiny but I sounded it out.
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