Does it match your story map? How would you catch a pesky goblin?
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Does it match your story map? How would you catch a pesky goblin?
4 Comments
Jjustin
4/3/2013 12:04:16 pm
This is very brave to do this kiearn and Aron.
amy
4/3/2013 12:43:25 pm
That is good kieran and I liked the part when you said aggghhhh it was really good kieran well done
amy
4/3/2013 12:46:01 pm
Aaron I really liked that it was really good only thing that is really good about that is how you kind of used however with commas at the end of each one of them.
Ebony
6/3/2013 11:25:28 am
Well done both of you .Yous did very good and you was brave to do that and you toke your time when reading that and if you made a mistake you would go back and correct it. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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