Blue sky's and Pink clouds blossom at speeds of one hundred miles an hour.
At last I was safe!
Slowly, the sky got darker. Anxiously, I ran to the under ground station to hide from the storm but it seemed to follow me! Surely I was safe or was I? Outside it sounded like world war three because it was so loud. The sounds sent shivers through me. My face dropped as I heard squealing and shouting. "Save me!" Although I instantly knew it was my mums voice, I wondered how she could be here. Should I go? Should I stay? I asked myself. Gracefully I ran out side and.....
Blue sky's and Pink clouds blossom at speeds of one hundred miles an hour. At last I was safe!
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Mr Temple
18/10/2013 12:27:29 pm
Fantastic work, Curtis! You focussed so well on this. I really like the questions and use of adverbs.
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Ju - Team100WC
20/10/2013 08:00:55 am
A great piece of writing Curtis. I like the way you describe your thoughts and feelings in response to the storm. Keep up the good work!
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