Cyber bullying is where you get bullied over the internet like on Facebook. There are many sites that you can get Cyber bullied on and if you do get Cyber Bullied then you must report this to an adult you trust,report it to the site you are on or the police if nessary. However, if you don't report this then the problem will get worse over time.Before you report the comment allways tell your parents first so they can see what it say's and you have there permission to report this comment. After when you have reported it the problem will stop as that person who sent that to you will be on a warning but if they send one again they will be band from that site.
This an amazing 100wc,I couldn't have said it better myself!!!
Josephine ;)
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Mr Temple
25/11/2012 12:42:14 am
Well done, Bethany. You have taken good care over this and used a range of openers including some commas. The website on the sidebar (Think U Know) has lots of tips about being safe on the internet.
Can you think where the comma should go in your After sentence?
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Grace Bralic
25/11/2012 06:05:38 pm
Maybe add some commas and full stops.
I like what you said about the wrongs and rights.
keep up the good work Bethany.
From Grace :)
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bayley
27/11/2012 04:34:30 pm
I thik your story is really creative and i hope to see more of your story's on the 10wc by bayley:)
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Laura (100WC)
28/11/2012 01:56:46 am
You've included some fantastic advice in this piece of writing! You clearly know your stuff! You've used commas really well! This is a great entry for the 100WC
Hi Bethany
Your story is really good I dont want to go on facebook ever
From Elise= Cameron class blog
Shoreham village school.
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