In wonderful winter the fields of lush GREEN grass are covered in FROST and snow. Even though the snow is light and fluffy, it’s HEAVY on my feet when I try to start RUNNING. The old rusty CARAVAN -abandoned by its owners in the distant field- is covered in a thick blanket of snow, making it blend in with its breath taking surroundings. The snow crumbles in my gloved hands like a fluffy cloud in the sky. A glittery snowman shimmering under the moonlight by the road side waves at cars as they splash sludge onto the path and him!
I like your work Ben, especially the sandwich sentence about the owners!
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We are Year 6 at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer. We are using this blog to explore web design, write creatively and as a wider audience for the class' talents!
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Our topic for the Autumn term is the Normans, looking at the architecture, sources and impact of the Norman Conquest of Britain.