A new 100WC for the whole world to see

10/10/2012

Last time, Niall and Millie had a try.....

This is the new sentence from 100wc.net for our keen writers to try. You can put it anywhere in your work as long as you keep it together. The prompt is:

…the temperature dropped suddenly and…

You have 100 words to add to these 5 making 105 altogether. Post your writing on this class blog then I will put it up the 100 Word Challenge website for the whole word to see. The link will stay open until 9pm 16th October.

9 Comments

logan b

11/10/2012 05:49:42 am

I would still have atry if i didnt have to much homework, its a nightmare came true.

justin and ethan

11/10/2012 07:59:10 am

Go and play on the sinece people

Kieran D

11/10/2012 01:04:24 pm

Me (Jack) and my step brother Jonathan were playing outside it was a wild windy wednesday. Our mum came out and told us that there was a tornado heading towards us but it would be approxamitely three hours fourty-four minutes and three seconds till it came. So we kept on playing our game nicely then Jake started cheating so i told our mum. As the temerature dropped we got cold and went inside. Mum give us our dinner. Beans,fries,pizza and chicken nuggets yum. Three hours thirty-one minutes and fifty-four seconds later we heard the hurricane/tornado alarm. It frightened the life out of me,Jake and my mum we ran as fast as we could to safe shelter there was nothing to go to. In the corner of my eye i seen a steel shelter with food inside. When we got to the shelter of steel we opened it with a crrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeak. Ten minutes later we all said as the temperature dropped to -7 degrees "Its getting c-o-l-d" As time went by the hurricane/tornado dissapered. We seen someone so we banged loudly. The person came towards us and let us out. It became night time and as the tempreture dropped i fell asleep and the same with Jake.

Olivia

16/10/2012 05:11:36 am

very good kieran

Niall

12/10/2012 10:01:42 am

Kieran was a normal everyday boy who was 13 years of age but sometimes he let his imaginary get the best of him. Like the time he tried to blow up the school because he thought he heard a noise when he was washing his hands. Or the time he believed the internet had died and no one was aloud on it.This is the story of when he believed J.K Rowling was an alien. This is how his story starts he gets up at exactly 7:20 goes down stairs and makes some Pineapple butter (which is Pineapple juice mixed with butter) "Kieran"his mum screamed he doesn't reply eats his toast and goes out. Any new news he asks Kaine his best friend YES! J.K Rowling is a alien he imagined what colour GREEN DUH! yes how very silly of me as he walks away. There was a compition to meet her you had to do a painting of the cover of one of her books he done Harry Potter and the deathly hallows and submitted it. After a few days he finds out he won and gets 1 ticket to meet her. He sets of for London and gets at the address only to find out shes not a Alien he drops his ticket and sprints ... NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN!

Niall

12/10/2012 11:43:42 am

As the temperature dropped suddenly goes betwwen Alien and he

Mark Temple

12/10/2012 11:45:39 am

I will put that in for you! Prize can be claimed at school on Monday.

Hollie

13/10/2012 01:03:26 pm

A year ago an old man was strolling in the park, suddenly a huge crack started to split the path in two pleases. The old man was running and running but a big grumble started to shake the old man’s feet, BANG! A cold steam shot up into the air and shot the wrinkly old man into the air with the steam. The old man was getting border and border by the minute, an hour later the steam started to lower the man on to his feet.
Once he got lowered on to his feet he quickly ran to an old people home and while he was running he shouted HELP THERES AN EARTH QUAKE HEDING TO US, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!

Mark Temple

13/10/2012 03:31:21 pm

What a fantastic story! I haven't linked it up to the 100wc.net site because you haven't used the target sentence; however I'm very impressed!

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