100wc: How to care for a pet....

7/3/2013

Write a 100 word instruction manual for your pet or a fantasy pet (a goblin? a dragon?).

You should include:

An introduction to hook the reader in and explain what the instructions are for
A list of 'ingredients'
The instructions (don't forget imperative verbs and adverbs)
A word of warning or encouragement at the end

You could use the following websites for
ideas:
http://www.lizaphoenix.com/encyclopedia/types.shtml
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/435499-mythical-dog-charries)
http://home.planet.nl/~artrako/Historie/Grijpvogels-EN.html

10 Comments

chantelle

8/3/2013 08:55:02 am

A goblin is a ugly, smelly creature that is a demon which can be large or small and lives in a fantasy world along with the pixies and unicorns.The goblin has a big nose and big ears and wears a brightly coloured clothes. You need a good imagination to live in a fantasy world with demons and pixies. You need to abid by the rules or you will leave the fantasy world for ever.

Mark Temple

14/3/2013 08:43:17 am

What a well written explanation text. What kind of words might you add to make it an instruction text?

Bethany w

9/3/2013 02:45:32 am

This is all about a grotesque goblin and how to take care of them

You will need a sturdy cage made of the finer dwarf metal, a strong chain and a fishing rod. Here are some instructions you will have to follow if you do not follow these institutions you will be eaten by your goblin
1.first, buy a goblin one you like
2. When you have took your goblin into your house carefully place him or her into your cage
3.next, give it something to eat but you will have to collect fish scales , centor burgers, ear wax, and mouldy,meat ith flys crawling on It
4.finally, feed your goblin the disgusting food and then you are easy to carry on taking care for your goblin but don't forget to wash out the cage after a week

A final word of warning!

Remember your grotesque goblin might eat you so NEVA ever be nasty to it allways be nice and give it loads of attention

Ebony

9/3/2013 07:45:10 am

Goblins are discusting and really ugly and they can be huge,medaim and really small.a goblin only eats money,sour lemon which can fill your face with sourness although they also like to eat sweets. Sometimes they can like to hve kittens as there baby also dogs goblins sometimes say "Help me find my baby dog or cat" but they really mean "help me find my mam and dad"

kieran

9/3/2013 12:46:55 pm

how to look after a pet goblin. First of all give it food every 100 minutes exept from midnight if you gie it food after midnight it will die. You will need alot of ingredients inclueding ogre eye chocolate snots fairys fairy poo fairy dust and there own essence they love thier own essence 100%. first, use a box and trap it, you could use food to distract it first. second,take it to area 51 and they will tret it well then they will give you it.

Katie

10/3/2013 06:31:32 am

How to look after a grotesque goblin.

you will need for your goblins food: 100 grams of ogre puss, two spoonfuls of fairy dust,a pickled fish eye, uniquorn burgers, out of date milk (preferably more than 3 months) a lock of princesses hair.

What to do:
1. First, go to your local goblin shop, and buy your own goblin.
2, Next, carefully place your new pet into a large sterdy cage, making sure you have put in a blanket and pillow .
3.Then, gather all of your food and plonk it all into giant black cauldron.
4. Now, stir all the ingredients until the water turns a purple-ish colour.
5.Next, pour the food into a bowl being careful not to spill any and place into the cage with your pet goblin.
6. Finally, you can look after your goblin without any help but remeber to clean out the cage after a few weeks.

Warning!!

If you dont feed your goblin the next time you go to give it attention it could think of you as food so always feed it!

Ben

10/3/2013 10:19:29 am

How to take care of a dog.

You will need: a collar, a lead, poo bags, a food and water bowl, dog toys, grooming equipment, an ample supply of dog food, water and dog treats, as many dog beds as needed and a good harness ( only needed if you wish to take your dog on car journeys or if its pulling to much) .

method:
Take your dog for walks regularly and feed 2 times a day (4 if puppy), clean up its poo, wash when necessary, train it to do tricks like sit heel paw and talk etc. Play with your dog around the house so it will not get bored.

Caitlin

10/3/2013 11:08:22 am

These instructions are all about how to care for a goblin,follow these instructions an you will become it's favorite and never be in its bad books!

1. Buy it a stash of food and never let it run out or your goblin will fight for it's hunger.

2. make sure you let you goblin rome freely and give it a drink once every 6 hours.

3. Give it the same love and care as you would with a dog or another pet!

WARNING: goblins are not just for birthdays they are for a lifetime!

Millie

10/3/2013 12:40:41 pm

These are the instructions on how to care for a pet dragon:-
First thing to remember is let the dragon choose you as its owner, as dragons can be very unfriendly.
Next choose a suitable area with a large tree to tie your dragon to. Dragons will fly away if left loose.
After that choose small creatures such as mice and rats and lay them on a rock.
Dragons need lots of exercise consequently you need to fly them twice a day at least. You will require a dragon whistle to bring it back and a collar incase you loose it.
Just remember dragons can turn nasty, treat them well.

Mr Temple

14/3/2013 08:50:30 am

Detailed well-planned instructions. I'm impressed with 'grotesque'. You have missed a few full stops and capitals to start sentences- try to remember to proof read through at the end.

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