7/10/2013 02:05:30 am
Hello Logan,
Mr Temple
8/10/2013 01:49:11 pm
A fantastic piece of writing, Lara. You have taken good care over your commas and choice of language. As a result, you clearly impressed Mr Mannell.
ben
16/10/2013 07:45:26 am
I like writing and the way you have fitted the prompt into the 100-word challenge Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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