John, you have used some interesting language : steathily, brilliant and have used speech marks well.
Be careful, you have spelt 'went' wrongly in two different ways. Can you see where? Also, don't forget a question mark with your excellent 3 questions at the end.
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John
16/10/2013 04:17:34 am
Where is my mum? Where is my dad? WHERE IS MY FAMILY!
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