Micah I realy like your story it is interesting you have got good verbs
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Abbie(year6)
8/10/2013 05:14:57 am
Hi Micah great story I'd give it 4 stars out of 5 it's very descriptive and I love the orange football
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Cailen[ Year 6
9/10/2013 12:23:54 pm
What a brilliant piece of work I love your openers and your punctuation. However, you have made a spelling mistake which is spotted you only put in 1 t in spotted. Apart from that I was thrilled
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