Suddenly I woke from a dangerous car crash! Soon after I got up I felt a swirly feeling as well as feeling sick. As I woke up,I found out that my Mother and my Brother was dead I was so melancholic. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a truck tipped over on it's side. Was he ok? The car was smashed which means it was hit by the truck! I asked my Father" Will I be ok or will I die of severe wounds?" He never replied. Slowly, the sky got darker! When,I looked down the road it looked like a baron wasteland. Suddenly a vehicle came around the bend and...
Sudden death!
Suddenly I woke from a dangerous car crash! Soon after I got up I felt a swirly feeling as well as feeling sick. As I woke up,I found out that my Mother and my Brother was dead I was so melancholic. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a truck tipped over on it's side. Was he ok? The car was smashed which means it was hit by the truck! I asked my Father" Will I be ok or will I die of severe wounds?" He never replied. Slowly, the sky got darker! When,I looked down the road it looked like a baron wasteland. Suddenly a vehicle came around the bend and...
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Mrs. Politowski Team 100WC
17/10/2013 09:17:38 am
This story made me feel a little melancholic, which is a good thing. Good writing should make people feel things. I'd love to know how this story ends. There are few mistakes in your writing so proofread a little more before posting. Keep up the great storytelling.
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