Today it was boring,because we had to do 15 tests. They were easy and some were hard. As i was walking home slowly the sky got darker. i thaght that there was somthing after me so i ran home. As soon as i got home i put a scary movie on the tv it was called thriller nights. After the movie was finished i went to bed and it was hallowen night.when i went to sleep i felt drips running down my forehead. i got a cloth to wipe it of i looked and found true blood!
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Mrs. Middleton Team 100WC
19/10/2013 09:07:36 am
Thank you for submitting a post this week, Jodie, to the 100 WC. I smiled at your starting sentence as I couldn't imagine a worse day than having to write 15 tests - oh my! 20/10/2013 03:33:09 am
Wow Jodie. This was VERY scary! I think your character is very brave putting on scary movies after such a frightening day already. Imagine waking up in the night to drops of blood on your forehead! I think the ending is perfectly timed. Just one thing - remember that the letter I is always a capital when written on its own. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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