walking up the towering sign that read."Pitch-black world!" I entered nervously. As soon as i entered I smelled oil.The first ride I saw was Under World! To the breath tacking under world. Pushing myself to go on, I saw that there was a gap in some of the rail, outstandingly it flew across the gap safely. I dared my self to go on. It was amazing! If all the rides were rides were like this I would come here every time! continuing on, until I saw the mesmerising sign that read. "Mine ride! Into the enjoyable mine shaft." I wasn't in pressed, however it went under ground and it was huge. Excited I nervously I made my way to the probably the most daring ride ever, it was called whirlwind, whirl to the middle and teleport out, I got on the breath tacking ride, I started to whirl round the however i teleported to the entrance when I got to the middle of the whirlwind.
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walking up the towering sign that read."Pitch-black world!" I entered nervously. As soon as i entered I smelled oil.The first ride I saw was Under World! To the breath tacking under world. Pushing myself to go on, I saw that there was a gap in some of the rail, outstandingly it flew across the gap safely. I dared my self to go on. It was amazing! If all the rides were rides were like this I would come here every time! continuing on, until I saw the mesmerising sign that read. "Mine ride! Into the enjoyable mine shaft." I wasn't in pressed, however it went under ground and it was huge. Excited I nervously I made my way to the probably the most daring ride ever, it was called whirlwind, whirl to the middle and teleport out, I got on the breath tacking ride, I started to whirl round the however i teleported to the entrance when I got to the middle of the whirlwind.
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