Surprisingly, when I arrived at the bus station I heard the sounds of shrieks. As I looked up to this magnificent, gigantic sight, it was a theme park. The neon, diamond shaped, green lights filled my eyes with pleasure as I headed through the gates. My heart started to whirl as I looked straight up at the Chain Saw. Nervous, I began to be sick as I lined up. Soon, I was flying through the air, my hair blowing quickly and my clothes jingling, as I reached the top. Suddenly, I'd finished being on the ride and I was given a fragile, delicate, creamy, textured, layered death by chocolate ice cream filled with marshmallows and chocolate buttons; as my lips touched it, I was in heaven.
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Surprisingly, when I arrived at the bus station I heard the sounds of shrieks. As I looked up to this magnificent, gigantic sight, it was a theme park. The neon, diamond shaped, green lights filled my eyes with pleasure as I headed through the gates. My heart started to whirl as I looked straight up at the Chain Saw. Nervous, I began to be sick as I lined up. Soon, I was flying through the air, my hair blowing quickly and my clothes jingling, as I reached the top. Suddenly, I'd finished being on the ride and I was given a fragile, delicate, creamy, textured, layered death by chocolate ice cream filled with marshmallows and chocolate buttons; as my lips touched it, I was in heaven.
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AuthorWe are Year 6 at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer. We are using this blog to explore web design, write creatively and as a wider audience for the class' talents!
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