Caitlin
4/10/2013 02:09:16 pm
I like how you left like ...
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Mr Temple
6/10/2013 10:29:11 am
Well done, Curtis you have used some of the language features we taked about. I particularly liked your 'I moved forward' short sentence and how you began a sentence with 'Noisily'!
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Drew
6/10/2013 02:38:18 pm
Hi Curtis, it's Drew from school.
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