Calling all guinea pigs!

26/9/2012

If you enjoy 100 word challenges, and would like to participate in the official 100 word challenge with hundreds of children from around the world, here's your chance:

Below is this week's 100 word challenge from 100wc.net:

This week we are using a different type of prompt. You will have 5 words to use in your writing. They can be anywhere in the piece and in any order but you have to use them all! That means you have 105 words this week. The words are:-

GREEN

TINY

PIANO

EXPLODED

SORRY

Remember you are likely to get comments from around the world (even more than the usual challenge) so make it your best!

10 Comments

Niall

28/9/2012 02:09:29 pm

Once there was this tiny green tree belonging to the native Americans the native Americans loved this tree very much then one day the native americans found a rock no one like the tree any more and the same thing happened loads of times until a piano came in charge they all loved the piano they chucked the rock away and cut down the tree for more room for the piano the piano had loads of room without warning they started destroying houses until one day a little boy came in and told the native americans they if they destroyed everything they will have nothing the americans replied we will we will have the piano but the trees caught fire came down to the rocks the americans jumped in the way of the fire to try and stop it but it didnt work they just burned themselves sorry for our bad way of living the americans whispered...

Mr Temple

28/9/2012 04:27:03 pm

Thanks for entering the challenge Niall. You have written an imaginative story, using all 5 of the words. What gave you the idea?

However, you know what I am going to say, don't you! Would you like to edit it for full stops and capitals? The easiest way is to copy that text into a new comment with some full stops and capitals.

Mrs Ovington

1/10/2012 12:14:31 pm

One day in a land far far away, there was a tiny green planet. On the tiny green planet lived tiny green people. Yes, those tiny green people lived in tiny green houses but only because the huge green houses they used to live in exploded all over the land! The ruler of the tiny green planet loved to listen to music. He wasn’t bothered what music he listened to as long it wasn’t Justin Bieber as he thought he was a extra terrestrial being (I don’t know what made him think that, sorry!). So he just played the piano.

Olivia

3/10/2012 11:23:47 am

very good mrs ovington

kieran d

2/10/2012 05:10:30 am

you must like green

caitlin

2/10/2012 05:14:26 am

hi miss ovington i like your tiny green people expression it was dead funny and yes it was exactly 100 words (well done) :)

chantelle h

3/10/2012 01:34:25 pm

Willie and Zack was walking up the path and willie heard Tom's voice(" oi what you doing out there").Willie looked around he never saw Tom any where.Silently, Willie saw Tom and he ran towords Tom with a big cheeky grin on his face like he'ed done some think wrong as the bomb's dropped Willie hid with Tom. Tom asked Willie(" how long have you been out there boy?") Willie replyed ("how would I know Tom i'm not a sickik ") I know that boy ya don't need to tell' iz.Nervously.Willie told Zack see you at school bye replyed Zack.Zack saw his evacuue parent's under a anderson shelter and Zack ran under the shelter and hide from the bomb's.

chantelle h

3/10/2012 01:49:38 pm

The massive garden with a tiny house had a very green piano playing in the spare room. it would normally play on its own with no one around apart from one time just when they was a big bang the very green piano exploded into millions of peices,it wasnt the persons fault who had the piano in the house but ahe did to apolougies so many times here is a not what was left behind:i am so sorry about your piano i will do any thing for you to forgive me a dont know what happend at first i thought the world was going to end however i am gla it didnt your faithfully the person who had your piano in the house.

logan b link

10/10/2012 11:04:39 am

Hello Mr Temple how are you doing with your new year 6 class, and if you now how tyler, luke and jade are doing let me now please

Mr Temple

10/10/2012 11:11:40 am

Hi Logan,

I hope you are well. Year 6 are working hard. Actually, we went to a museum you would love this week, called Eden Camp, in Yorkshire.

They had model planes, a Blitz experience and you could go inside a U boat for our WWII topic. You would love it.

I saw Tyler, Jack E. and Luke last night for the Howtown preparation meeting. They are all well.

Don't forget to leave them messages via their own websites too, because they are more likely to see them there!

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