4/10/2013 09:29:37 am
Great work Cailen
6/10/2013 08:53:41 am
What an interesting story? A Mexican wave of orange tortoises is very imaginative! I wonder how they got there and what happened to them? (Just remember it would be 'their flippers' not 'there') well done for using all of the prompt words.
6/10/2013 03:05:07 pm
Great story, Cailen. You have focussed hard on using your openers and a range of punctuation.
16/10/2013 04:16:28 am
Despite he was so heavy, I managed to flip him over!
16/10/2013 04:25:35 am
Despite him being heavy, I managed to flip him over!
7/10/2013 02:11:34 am
Hi Cailen, it's Drew from school.
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