A descriptive recount
Creeping up to the gates, I heard children screaming. Suddenly, a lovely smell of candy floss filled the air which made me hungry. Apprehensive yet excited, I walked through the shiny gates, I saw a huge sign saying agitated, tantalising, thrilling world of gloominess! Mesmerised by the sign which said" Into pitch-black!" Once standing next to the massive ride, I felt nervous. Vivid lights came out of nowhere and then I saw a wagon. Slowly, I walked up to a ride called terror tomb. We were extremely melancholic because we stood in the line for ages and then they closed it down due to technical difficulties. We were filled with disappointment! Finally, it reopened which left me feeling happy. Would you like to try these thrilling rides?
Creeping up to the gates, I heard children screaming. Suddenly, a lovely smell of candy floss filled the air which made me hungry. Apprehensive yet excited, I walked through the shiny gates, I saw a huge sign saying agitated, tantalising, thrilling world of gloominess! Mesmerised by the sign which said" Into pitch-black!" Once standing next to the massive ride, I felt nervous. Vivid lights came out of nowhere and then I saw a wagon. Slowly, I walked up to a ride called terror tomb. We were extremely melancholic because we stood in the line for ages and then they closed it down due to technical difficulties. We were filled with disappointment! Finally, it reopened which left me feeling happy. Would you like to try these thrilling rides?
