On a cold and stormy night, three children were out side playing on their bikes and ripstiks."I dare you to go and stand on the road until a car comes and then jump out of the way " said Merida. Not long afterMerida pushed her little sister Merida ( Angus, the youngest) onto the road. Jodie, the oldest and wisest said, " Merida, I am telling father what you did tonight!" Just at that moment, a car went zooming by. The three girls heard a clinking noise consequently, they ran onto the road and saw a big rusty key with a pearl on it.
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Mr Temple
1/2/2013 02:20:50 pm
Hi Martine,
Mrs Ovington
2/2/2013 05:03:02 am
Martine, that was really good! I wonder if you've based Jodie on anyone we know? ;-) 3/2/2013 12:06:01 pm
Hello Martine. It's a good job Jodie was there to be so sensible and stop Merida doing dangerous things.
Katie and Jodie
4/2/2013 02:32:25 am
Hey Martie! we're really missing you! Wish you were here right now, were practicing for the talent show and it is really hard without you! :'( missing you lots and lots xx Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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AuthorWe are Year 6 at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer. We are using this blog to explore web design, write creatively and as a wider audience for the class' talents! 
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