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Caitlin
4/10/2013 02:04:18 pm
Really good work.
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Lauren - Team 100 wc
6/10/2013 04:02:45 pm
Hi Ryan, good 100 wc. I liked your use of the question, just remember to read over your work as there are some mistakes. Keep up the good work. :)
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Mr Temple
7/10/2013 11:01:50 am
An inventive idea. I know you're a good gymnast but didn't realise you could do a double flip. You have used a range of punctuation, but maybe there are too many exclamation marks.
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