Caitlin
4/10/2013 01:58:53 pm
Great work
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Mrs Fine 100 WC Team
6/10/2013 12:54:12 pm
Hi Micah
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Mr Temple
6/10/2013 03:07:30 pm
Micah, what a fantastic start to your story! Beginning with an ing word then great punctuation like ! and later on you use 'tedious' instead of boring.
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