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Caitlin
5/10/2013 02:35:42 am
Great work.
Mr Temple
6/10/2013 03:14:48 pm
A great story, Drew - full of action as always. I didn't realise your dad was a magician!
Curtis
8/10/2013 05:11:41 am
Fantastic and thank you for my comment you realy thought about this and it payed of.
Miss Raddon (Team 100wc)
9/10/2013 11:33:26 am
Well done for entering the 100wc Drew! I really enjoyed reading your story. I think it would be even better if you wrote all in the same tense. Keep up the good work :) Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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