It was Sunday. I nearly fell out of bed when I woke with such a shock, as my alarm went off at half past eight. As soon as I was dressed, I stepped out of the door. A funny looking portal was ahead of me. Somehow I had just been transported to a graveyard with white crosses and lots of people in odd looking outfits. It made me feel very melancholic. It was Remembrance Sunday. I heard the soldiers chanting my name, Charlotte remember me, we are remembering you. I had just died. I felt my heart freeze and my soul left me as I fell to the ground...
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hannah team 100wc
17/11/2013 02:37:34 pm
Hello Abbie, thank you for your 100wc entry I really enjoyed reading it. It was a brilliant take on this week's prompt and you used great descriptive language. Well done.
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