In 2010, it was dark and gloomy. It was Halloween they was a man who always handed you lots of sweets. Every would go to his house and get lots of sweets he had 2 kids. There were 2 twin boys, they were only 5 so they weren't aloud to go out by there self. But we were because we were all 11 year old. My mam give my friends I was not happy because if went to there door there mums wouldn't give them out. However we were still friends all of us went in my hose because they were sleeping and it was getting to late and we all went to bed.
Kaine, this is an intriguing start to your story, I enjoyed reading it. It's good that all the words are spelled correctly, but not all of them are the right word - one or two there and theys got confused. Always re-read to check. Keep it up!
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